its was pretty good in the beginning but the biggest issue is that the main character is just so boring and apathetic hes more a block of wood then a person pretty bad story progression in all honestly
An amazing start to the story with lots of potential although there were some missed opportunities, but by having the nine headed hydra as a potential spirit he could have the MC look for the 9 offspring of the dragon god as the spirit rings for it. Also although it is a little fast pace at the beginning and some embarrassing moments would be fun to read about, but lets face it in Soul Land fan-fictions the story doesn't really start till they are 6 yrs old.
I like the overall concept of this novel; I have never seen it before. The characters so far are pretty well-built, and the world is good. There is redundancy at times and some grammar and punctuation mistakes. But, I looked further into the novel, and it seems the author has fixed most of these issues.
Hello guys I am the author of this book. If you are tired of seeing bullied, dark past, sister relationship, family problems and the same cliché stories. Then this novel is for you all.
This is a re-review and one with some honesty. First of all the story turned into something else than I intended, and it was actually worse in some parts than my first. I made the mc edgy for the sake of him being edgy. Elior is almost a character without flaws but I made him somewhat a hypocrite intentionally.The worldbuilding was dull, and honestly, I have saved up a few things for later parts. which turned out to be a bad decision.The writing quality is poor, and you will expect a lot of typos. If you don't fear it then feel free to continue. As for the story development and plot, it is above average with a few nice fight scenes, here and there. and the main idea of the book is pretty good.Like my other book, this one got its voice in the chapter 70s. Honestly, I still think the book is better than many on this site with all those flaws. Continue if you like and leave behind comments.
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Redoing my review after more than 30 chaps. Still love it. The lemons I was waiting for came and I wasn't dissapointed. MC is smart, the dialogues are realistic and not cringe. And the character design is interesting
"Master had a lover before. That girl was really kind and master loved her very much." Suddenly, I felt the pains deep down my heart. I didn't know why but I had a feeling that I was jealous. Really jealous. "Master used to be the gang-leader of a really strong gang. Other gangsters don't dared to offend him but Master had many enemies around him. One day, the enemy kidnapped Master's lover, she was killed. Master said 'I failed to save the one I truly love, I don't think I had the right to love any other girl now.' Master actually cried. He was so depressed and he didn't have any appetite to eat. Few weeks later, he came back with the tattoo on his chest. He said the tattoo represents the girl he truly love and will never forget her."
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