Good work author! Very interesting first chapter, and good follow up as well. Not many chapters published right now, but I can see it has potential. Keep it up!
Pretty decent story if you don’t mojd Gary Stu narratives. 50 chapters in and it seems like the MC is playing a singleplayer game, having him completely seperated from grouping due to his own fear of betryal is bad enough, But limiting him from Starting/being a part of a Guild is Just as strange. I think that the ultimate drawback for this novel is the choice of not expanding on the state that the MC was in prior to traveling back in time. As a neutral reader I couldn’t care less about his struggles if I know nothing about it. Also making him the Son of an Angel and then having him avoid the church like the plague is really wierd. Intially it would seem that he doesnt need to have a guild because he essentially is a high ranking member of the church by birthright. I am already assuming that the church is going to clichely turn out evil. I did think it might twist the plot in a way that shows him succeed in the game extraordinarily, while having him still have to live through the crumbling of his family regardless of their wealth. But it doesn’t seem like that anyways :/
I am in love with the plotline of your story. I can see you went ahead and took your time to outline the novel for your readers to enjoy. I can't wait for what happens next. Happy writing.
This Story will be super intresting. The author start this time was much better than what he started previously. I am a fan of your first work: The God level Mage. I can't wait to see what would happen with this one too
i really like this novel,at first I thought the mc has no motivation no ambition so after reading 100 chap i was disappointed but after 200 chap the story line was improved drastically and now I think it is better than tyranny of steel.but one of the most frustrating thing is that the update frequency is really bad.we have to wait 2 or 3 days for 1 chap.i think author should concentrate one novel at a time.please author if you reading this please at least update daily,it will be better if 2 chaps in a day
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