There's a huge loophole in this novel.. if his wife truely bound by life contract at least they put something or protect him so they won't die .. it doesn't make sense they only put Julia and butler guy ..They're Goddess from there perspective continent and yet they can't put at least 8 tier .old man. To keep him safe ..
After reading though 30+ chapter, I think, I better drop this. The game element is truly dump. If someone really open a game like this, it will be closed in a week. It's just like fantasy world that has a game system. Crimes, gores, sexual contents (not happen yet, but a mentioned of allowance by the gamemakers), these happened secretly in the context of the story, and the government don't issue a ban yet.MC don't have anything but kung fu. Kung Fu maniac with out a specific character or goal. A casual and very noob player with an exploited cheat, called Kung Fu skills.The story can be more interesting, if his mage class has at lease a hint to do with a progress of the story aside from being mentioned as a hindrance or a handicap, he has against those with physically related class.Side characters? Aside from the female thief, who possibly be a female lead, there is no one that memorable at all up to this point.
The concept the plot of the novel is great at least I liked it, just has some grammatical errors which will soon be fixed as the edited ones are underway. It's about a child named Lex builled the whole life and gets thrown off a cliff acquire the eye system. Although maybe op for for the current is actually not so op according to author as the universe and rest hasn't been explored, I advise you guys to read it, it's a bit more fresh than typical novels.
Oh, your second book, Senpai? The title is really eye-catching and the first few chapters had a nice balance of comedy and zombie apocalypse going on. This is going to be a good novel!Keep up the good work author!
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