Night Of the Pawn

I know my account Is new but this is actually a pretty good story so far. It could be better, but it could be because the story only has a few chapters. But I'm kinda glad this was my first story to read. keep up the good work :)

I think this was a really good story, at first it was hard to understand but it gets easier throughout the story. I also think this was an amazing original piece from an up and coming author.

I can’t believe Nolan did that to Peaches. I’m in tears and in shock.