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The author hates Buddhists, typical communist behaviour.

I love this story, but 12 SS perchapter is wild. I really hope thatthis sin't a permanent change, a million thanks to the translators and authors!

All five for now as its just getting started.based on the twenty chapters, I can see hints of astral petstore, and other beast taming genre novels.

first of all you seams new writer.  it’s ok keep writing you will Learn more. about story development It's like other Chinese cultivation novel but you add some extra about haven that other novel don’t say. you didn’t say much about main character design how he looks now. update is main factor keep it up update Daily. Don't make world like main character go from one realm to another It's  boring.  make something different. keep learning and keep this novel as long as you write You'll Learn.  your idea is so keep it up.

Warning! Stop reading at true ending! Do not reading the alternative ending because you will want to strangled the author and shaking them while screaming "why oh why"

"What made you be in such a hurry anyway" the lady asked.

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