Neon Oligarch

Over all it’s okay. As it’s in starting stage can’t say much. Hope the author gives a good one.     I like system stories because the first I read was reincarnated with strongest system. That was amazing story for me. After that read a few other like fox system and dragon system. Dragon system was good. So checking with phoenix system now.

here for the challenge have yet to really understand

why aren't you even reading this??? you won't regret it🙂u200d↔️

Wouldn’t recommend. MC lacks depth and world building is close to non-existent. MC gets thrown into action fairly quickly and the readers are stuck wondering what’s what and how it happened. What’s the Veil? What’s the Ashlands ? Why’d he get infected ? Since when was that a thing ? What happens to their original bodies?Other than being an outskirt rat what’s his background? How is life like for everyone since the veil appeared ? Nothing gets an explanation. You have to accept it as is and move on lol. Made it to chapter 15 and I was being generous.