Yes, I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review, but I did this to say that please drop an honest review if you're reading this, it'll help a lot, I'm open to criticism.
This story has a lot of potential! Synopsis is really good that i couldn't help but go and read it out of curiosity 😅. The first chapter started off quiet atmospherically though recognising the MC was very easy. Then, we meet the legendary mentor and the MC's journey to greatness begins!
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Just started reading, the story has an interesting premise and a relatable MC. The story immediately starts without making us have to wait around, which I like. The magic system is interesting and explained well to the reader. The MC's abilities seem interesting and unique. Will continue reading with interest!
Solid work!
I feel that the pace is a bit too brisk at the beginning, with our MC being chucked into a training arc from the first chapter, but as you read on, the world expands and it all starts to click together.
The magic abilities introduced are interesting and I'd day the MC shows an affinity for them that's enough to pique a reader's interest, which is a plus!
Overall, it's a good story. I was just scrolling through webnovel and found this book. The first chapter really set the atmosphere. But I have to say this, please use something more attractive as your novel cover. That's my only complaint.
This story has good potential, not so good grammar but still I can see something for it. Now granted, this story gets more views that power stones or reviews but don't stop writing, I took the time out of my day to review this.
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Overall: 8/10. I am still reading though
I feel that the pace is a bit too brisk at the beginning, with our MC being chucked into a training arc from the first chapter, but as you read on, the world expands and it all starts to click together.
The magic abilities introduced are interesting and I'd day the MC shows an affinity for them that's enough to pique a reader's interest, which is a plus!
Great work!