I only read up to chapter 11.
In my opinion this novel have potential, not bad.
But i don't like the story because author use 3rd person perspective, just try to count how many times author write "Evan" in a single chapter, personally i don't feel connected to the story because of this.
Also i feel like author need to use more punctuation, i notice author rarely use coma (,) sign on his story which made the paragraf feel chaotic.
I also don't like how author do chapter 1, the sacrifice part on chapter 1 is unnecessary for me, and its better if you put it in chapter 10.
In my opinion you made chapter 2 to chapter 9 as a flashback is a bad choice.
I mean why would you give readers an 8 chapter long flashback right from the start? its unnecessary, everyone can literally read chapter 1 and jump to chapter 10 immediately and can still understand the story.
Its a bad start in my opinion.
You should know that you need to make the story as interesting as possible on early chapter to make people stay and hyped for the next chapters, but here i am dropping on chapter 11 before even i know mc new power after the sacrifice.
I hope my review can help you to get better.
good luck author.
honestly it's not a bad novel but I'm more displeased with the fact that it's got the word necromancer in the title but it's had nothing to do with minions or rasing anything to do his bidding and I'm at chapter 110. plus the book goes premium at around chapter 45 honestly a waste of a read from my point of view but the story's not bad if you like this kind of novel that is.
I just finished volume 1 and there hasn’t been any mention of necromancy. Given that it is in the title, I feel like it is false advertising. At best, the pacing and development is very slow.
I can't get past the grammer issues and repetitive sentences. Multiple paragraphs in the same chapter contradict themselves. The story may have had potential, but I can't continue this to find out.
I gave it a try after reading comments below...and I completed more than 240 chapter...God, it's super slow paced...Unnecessary Tournament arc for more than 70 chapters. Author tried to squeeze and stretch the story in every aspect that he could... I read so many novels and this one made top list for being slow paced and awfully dragging MC's power level up and creating problems for his level ups. And none of u can understand my frustration until u read the story.
But hey, it's my opinion and it should not cloud your anticipation to read go awry...
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In my opinion this novel have potential, not bad.
But i don't like the story because author use 3rd person perspective, just try to count how many times author write "Evan" in a single chapter, personally i don't feel connected to the story because of this.
Also i feel like author need to use more punctuation, i notice author rarely use coma (,) sign on his story which made the paragraf feel chaotic.
I also don't like how author do chapter 1, the sacrifice part on chapter 1 is unnecessary for me, and its better if you put it in chapter 10.
In my opinion you made chapter 2 to chapter 9 as a flashback is a bad choice.
I mean why would you give readers an 8 chapter long flashback right from the start? its unnecessary, everyone can literally read chapter 1 and jump to chapter 10 immediately and can still understand the story.
Its a bad start in my opinion.
You should know that you need to make the story as interesting as possible on early chapter to make people stay and hyped for the next chapters, but here i am dropping on chapter 11 before even i know mc new power after the sacrifice.
I hope my review can help you to get better.
good luck author.
But hey, it's my opinion and it should not cloud your anticipation to read go awry...
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Mc is an extra loner but I like his confidence in beating a b***h down man follows the Kazuma's if you know what I mean.
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