Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Honestly, the story started good, it was a fun read, until around chapter 204. This chapter showed us that the MC is just an emotionless brick. Usually a story is formed through the interactions and connections the characters have between each other and how they grow through them. But this MC is the perfect ninja, no attachment, only training and killing montages. Tbh, a very bland MC.

Absolutely loving this novel it's quickly becoming one of my favorites. Your writing is great and even though some people might not like the "slow" pace I'm loving it.

I agree with another reviewer that there being few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC is a good thing for now considering it's the academy arc and the MC has no reason to care about other non-canon students (except possibly his future teammates).

However I am interested in seeing dialog in the future between the MC and his future teammates. It may open up new ways to expand on the MC as he is almost too perfect personality wise. I'm wondering if he'll have any flaws? Will he always get along with everyone? Does he work well in a team? Can he get others to listen or will he listen to others?

For now it makes sense because he's basically an adult and has no reason to pick fights with children about strength but will he ever lose his cool?
Whether he stays this Kakashi-esk personality with the work ethic of Guy or we see a new side I look forward to it either way. Thank you for the chapters!

Well the fight scene was good a little bit long but it's fine ,................................................................................................................................................................
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It's good. Proper grammar, no plot holes, pretty much everything you'd want in a good fic. Keep on reading.

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At chapter 55
This is a really creative fan fiction that occurs in an anime world and doesn't make me cringe at forcing the character to interact with most of the main characters in Naruto. For someone like me who likes the growth from weak to strong, this is gold as it is well-paced and has good story development. I was gutted when the Author took his break but good thing he saw the light and the will of fire made him continue with this novel

Well i like it. The fact that he takes time. To learn stuff what kept me reading that's all I want to say but looks like u need to 144 char at least . I think this is it see ya

Tbh this is my first Naruto fanfic read and it destroy my taste in a good way. After I read the latest chapter during this review (ch358), I decide to find other Naruto fanfic but nothing come close to this one.

So yeah, I can’t enjoy the other fanfic because of this one lol.

A minus one for me, the MC should’ve atleast meet Naruto once during all of this chapter. Kinda sad this not happening yet.

Ne ne author-san pls continue writing this novel is a gem compared to what I read in  other naruto fanfics UHUHUHU so PLS continue