I really want to love this book.. the storyline seems promising but it need edit big time .. the he/she/ him/her are all messed up . The timeline in the story is also confusing . I got to chapter 7 and just can’t go any further !
i thought he'd be successful going and dominating the chi universe after obtaining the fiend lord's memories and start story with Zendaya... it would have been better if the diffracted universe had not been destroyed and he finally gets to live a peaceful life after all these........ But I loved it.
I absolutely love the premise of the story, and the introduction of the servants in a world of Cultivation is a very interesting and fresh concept.it's sad to hear it won't be updated as often as your other works (if at all), I find this one to be the most interesting out of all your works, I just hope it isn't abandoned.if it's not abandoned, then I look forward to seeing what you have in store.Have a Nice Day and Stay Healthy!
Overall interesting story line, the characters are well described, and the world background is put together in an interesting way.The updates seem to be rolling in, which is great!The only thing I noticed is that there are a few issues with grammar, the one that stood out is subject verb agreement. There are cases when the subject is singular and the verb is plural. This is pretty small though, and doesn't cause interruptions in the reading experience.
TRADUCTOR GOOGLE (JAJAJ XD T_T): I think that of all the reviews of the new novels this is the best along with (Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich, but the bad thing about this is that it has a lot of comedy and a point where it gets boring), I hope a lot of this novel since at Look has a focus on the genre INFINITY, think about it! a person who travels between worlds and acquires new memories and techniques sounds very interesting. and I almost bet that in the image they put, the mc does not hold a sword but a magic wand or a staff, so I guess there is also magic * - * or he becomes a magician :O
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