My wild boss

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

Apart from the long synopsis this story is actually lit... Ethan 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

The story is good and has more potential.But the writing is not as good as story is.He is making dialogue that doesn't fit just to make it mysterious and to add a sense of darkness.Relationship and friendship are just feeling too forcefull. like og mc of novel challenged our mc try to crush him but in next few chapters they become rivals when I was reading that i felt absolute cringe.Writing need improvement and story is too fast paced.Everything is perfect other than that.Author need to work on relationship and dialogue first than story.Highly recommend

This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked.While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!

very Good novel with great world and colony building

Story procession is good.  lets start and see how good it is??