I’m a girl, and well, the relationship stuff in the novel’s pretty accurate...Besides that, I’m enjoying the book. I don’t read ML ever, but a friend told me this one was really funny so I gave it a try. It surpassed my expectations :)Also loved the author’s replies in the comments, like an extra layer of funny. Don’t miss those!
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Writing Quality: 3/5 Average or readable enough, it lacks a bit of editing especially in the first chapters where the "i" is not capitalizedexample: "Where i am? is this a dream? 'Someone kidnapped me? No, there is no reason to throw me here then. Do i sleepwalked? No, i can't reach that far just by sleepwalking.'Stability of Updates: 2/5 UPDATE MORE! Like seriously it needs a daily update.Story Development: 4/5 I won't say it's the best but where can you find something so unique as a Slice of life wuxia? Where the main character is neither the antagonist or someone special more like a bystander type of character.Character Design: 3/5 Too be honest the only thing this story lacks is characters hopefully there will be romance in this since it can get boring really fast without any stimulation regarding relationships.World Background: 3/5 Average enough but not bad.Total score: 3/5Highly recommended even if my rating is a bit low, the plot is interesting, the writing even though not edited can be readable enough.In the later chapters, it seems to be fixed still you should edit the first few chapters with editing tools like Grammarly.
I give this one star simply because the translator is an ass. lolIgnoring that, the story is actually good, i highly recommend it. the character interaction is not bad too it feels engaging and fun.and it all got ruined because of the translator .... this shit needs an editor.... it's not worth it to continue reading this if you pay with money. just look around for a free chapter. paying for this is a hard pass for me..
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