My system increases my talent

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: Doktor_Heinz
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. LordRaven
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    I read until chapter 44 and decided to stop.I'll explain why based on the rating.The pros:1. I love the world background. The idea of the sect is small within a not so great kingdom within a great (?) empire. Outside of the continent, there might be more things to be discovered as hinted through MC's blur memories of the past.2. Updates are 10 chapters/week. Amazing!3. There's a clear direction. Find disciples, unlock their potentials, solve their problems yada yada. I'm satisfied, at least.The cons:1. The pacing is slow and there's too much fillers.Why is a servant brewing black tea and green tea important to the story? Did MC and her disciple got addicted to them?Nope. In fact, the servant competition could be compress into a few paragragh (or none at all) and be done with. If the servant is special, the focus should be on her instead of the whole competition.And the upper echelons attending the new disciples examination from the get go is strange too. If they only attend during the final, I understand, but from the very beginning? Even watching when they are checking their bone age? Strange. They have too much time in their hands.2. Character design is too common. TBH if it was not stated that MC was from another world, I wouldn't even know. There's no uniqueness from the way he talk or behave, even when he's alone. The only time I notice is when he used the word 'broadcast' while he tried to activate his disciple's physique.Aside from that, there's no hint of slang or casualness from him.Aside from the rating, I really love the idea of MC collecting disciples which is why I read the novel.
  1. Vindamaroon
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    So This Novel Will Not Picked Up?Its no more in the TRIAL READ  nor in VOTING .😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😢😭😢😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😢😭😢😭
  1. ONE_ABOVE_ALL
    ONE_ABOVE_ALL rated it
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    nice work author..... l really like ur writting skill as well.. and the story is very interesting... plzzz keep uploading more so that l can read more....all the very best and do upload more... l can't wait to read what the story....
  1. Solor1
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    Otimo estou ansioso por mais, essa e uma das muçelhores historia que já li até hoje essa foi umas da que mais gostei e espero pelo próximo capitulo.
  1. ElijahMartin9780
    ElijahMartin9780 rated it
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    Raw?.............................................................................................................................................
  1. DeathWalker
    DeathWalker rated it
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    So far the story is great!!, I like how the character designs are detail. The story is got a lot of mystery so many questions?? That need answers...  I'm already hooked...
  1. RIPstone
    RIPstone rated it
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    Should have been a really good story. First of all, the progression is different than promised in summary.Second, this story is unusually slow.
  1. IsaiahCaudill
    IsaiahCaudill rated it
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    Following this sentence, I renounced all, all my so-called freedom that I aspired from my childhood, being born before the marriage. I was the laughingstock of the Fleury family.
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