Ahhh mc is so dumb, I can’t believe it’s the mc and not the author poorly thinking things through. Outside of the obvious flaws( so long as you don’t remember anything and suspend rational thinking) it’s entertaining…
So Far i love the concept and development, i need to read more to see how it is, but if it is like the other Authors Fics then im sure it would be good, one of the few non harem novel and one of the original novels that probably doesn't have any unnecessary drama over the main Couple, not to mention its free unlike other original novels that doesn't worth the shot, so definitely you should give it a try
First of all, the idea of Anima is inspired by Gu from Reverend Insanity but I've put my own twist on it. Hopefully it's at least a little bit original and you like it.Outside of that, I think the book is quite unique, especially in terms of how the world is and what the main character is like. However, I won't say too much other than that the MC is pure evil.Best parts of the novel:Characters - The main characters all have depth and personality, but it's not just them. Every character has at least some thought behind them, even throwaway characters. That means you won't get scenes where side characters act stupidly for no reason.Quality of writing (I am English, I speak great English, don't expect spelling errors or anything)World building - I've put a lot of effort into creating the continents, thinking about what species live there, what environments there will be and all that good stuff. I'm especially proud of the more that will start to be revealed as the novel goes on.Bad bits:Dialogue - Some conversations may seem a little clunky or stiff. This is the main area of my writing that I'm trying to improve, so hopefully dialogue will become more natural and free-flowing as the novel progresses.Slow(ish) development - The novel isn't a slow starter at all, it begins with 3 high action trials and there are lots of fight scenes after that as well. What I mean is that characters and places will not be developed right away. I will take time with these things and you won't get huge lumps of backstory or information about people, places or things.Changes in writing style - I have written other things before, but this is my first full-length novel, so my writing style will change and develop as the novel progresses.P.S. I would really appreciate comments about which parts of the novel you enjoyed and which bits could be better. These kinds of comments will help me become a better writer, which will in turn make this a better novel. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the book!
Hmm, This novel wonderful, but it doesn't suit my taste, but it is great that i would put it in my list of favorite novels.But what I like in your novel the most, was when the argonaut raided the althaus state or mansion, I love on how you put details that made me imagine on what really happened, but sadly it was too fast, I didn't get to enjoy or to see the suffering of the servants in the mansion, but althaus gets the worst fate so much suffering and such traumatizing event have happened to his servants, such a scary experience but I want to see more.. but it would a false hope to hope that you will add more of it in the arc, but hopefully I would get to read more of it in the future, hopefully...And yes your side characters/characters, such a splended work they have such a wonderful personalities, I like them hope I could meet some crazy characters, I could put some of my reviews on the characters but they're quite many so I'll pick only ren to review on.ren is such a lame character I hate him and i love him, his such a well done Character that made me hate him, his naive a fool and a trustful person and a lustful person an awkward Character that made it hard for me to read his interactions with other characters, but his a great character that can be easily manipulated and easily changeable, that he put so much trust on a girl that summoned him that easily betrayed him, his such a fool that I like him, the girls action made him distrustful of other people, hence his such a changeable and easily manipulated, his such a fool that he trusted a girl that summoned him into this otherworld, and I don't want to spoil other readers so I'll stop here, but I get it that his a manipulatable person it happened alot in the real world, so his a nice character his such a normal person I like him.The story so far is great but the development of the story is fast it made me bored of reading it cause things happened fast, but for other readers the story has a normal a phase of development, but for me it's fast, but I saw nothing wrong in the story so far.For the the writing quality I don't know, I've never seen some wrong spellings or typos, English is not my first language after all, and the updates of chapters is fast I like it. I'll end my review here I can write more but I think this is enough.
This book was amazing truly the best book I have ever read some things need work like the spelling was off and words put in the wrong places but other than that this was a some and gave me a bit of a summary about the actual game💕💕💕
Hi everyone! Welcome to the review section of my novel. I'm the author of Sunshine and Shadows and this is the first novel I'm writing that is not fantasy. Did you read the story and liked it? Then please leave a review!Thanks again for reading!
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