chapter 153 fucking ruined the book for me, the whole city arc so far has been dog**** compared to the rest, but when he gave 40% of his company to a guy for renting his fucking field for growing crops for the food, and another 40% to his friends, while only keepping 20? I'm fucking done. if your **** at business, just don't fucking add numbers, literally just gloss over this ****, if this is the MC I'm not reading this book, imagine tanking a book in 20 chapters, MC is literally a doormat who doesn't make decisions himself, he never tries to get any favourable conditions, he literally volunteers to get shafted in every fucking deal, and gives away so much ****
The story is really rather good, the only rhing i would like is to see improvements in grammar and phrasing. That way the story will be much easier to read and more enjoyable.P.S. i hope the author gets the issue with the account resolved or phone resolved.
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