my scarred mate

Great so far

i just want to askdoes no one care that it uses catties kilogram and 500gram and that it always changesuch inconsistency make it hard to read

It kinda sound's like the authors rambling on in the first 5 or so chapters. like they don't have a clear picture or understanding of what's they're writing. Overall the concept and ideas are there but I think they could've been developed further.

Patient and smart mc. The goldenfinger is not too overpowering. It is rara to see such a complete book. A breath of fresh air within the eastern novels.

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Great start. Good pace. Nice story development as of now. All the best author.

The Captain hummed. "Good point!"