My Pirate System

friendly warning to potential readers the mcs mom whòŕes herself out for money in chapter 15
something like that is not for me,hence I'll head out.

Story was good. really good with world devolopment. But MC'S adopted mother opted to who*e(gangb*nged) herself out, for a reason. Author just put this scene casually. D*ckhead author should have put warning in synopsis if he was gonna put this type of with discription,since lot of people are sensitive with this type of scene.
should not be suprising if author put hardcore Netor*re casually with discription.
I hope this comment stays,not get deleted.

Finally, I'm here to drop a review that came directly from my... touchscreen device.
The intro was a bit interesting- introduction of the character and his prowess before the official start of the work.
The writing quality is great for someone who's native language isn't English, and the book's design is great.
Although they are some minor errors, they do not affect the book's flow. The plot is great and starting chapters hooking.
Good job man, hope you continue to release more amazing chapters!

not good enough to recommend but not to incredibly terrible to say its not worth giving it a chance either, still wouldn't recommend.

to preface this review, I read until the end of the free chapters and I figured I should give my piece.

The premise from the title does sound incredible, even for a system novel and when the MC finally gets more involved in the story around chapter 16-20, it starts to pick up. Between chapter 5-15 ish involves a lot of world building but it's not related to the MC which was a turn off for me.

The system also takes a long time to come into the picture (around chapter 22 ish). Generally speaking, the starting chapters can stand to be rearranged or be condensed since it's not enough of a hook imo.

As from the brief time I had with the free chapters, the MC is written somewhat close to an 8 year old would think, albeit more mature than expected which is a nice detail. I honestly couldn't tell you who are the side characters beyond showing me the names and what they are but not much more.

It definitely has promise and definitely isn't a bad read if you are looking for a pirate themed novel. It just could be executed better from an entertainment standpoint.

too long of a build up, inconsistent grammar, MC has a weird mindset, odd s**ual assault bit added in, cliche after cliche. I don't know what I'm reading sometimes.

the opening was so nice, and you could feel the chaos and unbalanced waves, the system begins a bit late but don't worry, you will be entertained enough on this voyage with pirates. [img=recommend]

Just found this in the new novels a interesting read it has a lot of potential hope there will be more of it[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]