I really liked how he started in the story! Instead of just playing football, it’s also about character development as well as setting a foothold into his “new life”. There are some wrong-written words but everything is still easy to understand👍🏼 but because of the development it has a rather slow start but all in all I really recommend reading the story!
Okay first of all, I love how the story is going and I’m really interested in finding out How the story will be. A little tip from me, you should elaborate more on the characters and their feelings. but that’s just a suggestion
Story starts out great, then the author starts to drag the story out, milking every chapter. The mc gets draped in outrageous plot armor, all powerful people like him, all villains despite differences in age and cultivation are outwitted, and yet the nothing really gets done other than the occasional formation blowing up, which then magically leads to everything going the mc's way. Story would be so much better if mc gained strength in a more tangible way, but all he's done for hundreds of chapters is eat ghosts and not advance in cultivation. Was enjoying the "eats gods" and "divine god in the making" angle until I realized it just takes away any suspense that was remaining. Cultivators in meat space won't kill him because they all love him, ghosts can't kill him because he eats them, there's literally nothing in the world that actually poses a threat.
"..."ayahku hanya diam dan berusaha menatap mataku dan berkata " ayah saying sama kau nak, sama kakak kamu juga, tapi ini pilihan ayah..tolong dukung ayah yah nak, ayah juga ingin bahagia, kita bahagia sama sama yah nak, kita mulai hidup bar yah nak." Ujar ayah ku pada ku.
" Fuck, I almost forget about that little girl." Lin Long Tian suddenly remembered as he rushed back to where he placed the little girl off to sleep and quickly grabbed her and they left on there way.
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