in terms of plot this one is quite unique even with many copy/paste of the same genre, the plant vs zombie the dark fog and the amount of zombie going to your home depends on your exploration is quite good, but the problem is the amount of useless chapter specially when its alice pov its totally useless just like today (enoch news) it was just alice pov thinking and the chapter is tottally skippable
I really like the way it's going hope the system stays relevant and the characters fun to read about. Um now i don't really know what to type. I can't spell so you know. I will how tell anout Rick. Rick is a asshole but he doesn't mean to be. But why could he be one.
Basically a trash...all those fking points yet he can't increase that fked up concealment shi t ...and complain about not having points to increase...and the author is literally a dog fker that doesn't even explain any fk he's writing...this is one of the worse type of novels...no offense to any authors...but this type of novels authors are a disgrace...
So far so good, I just stopped at chapter 21 since I'm out of passes but it's a fun read. I like the Mcs powers but I think they need a more developed description, honestly, that's it, some things are rushed or glossed over and they don't need a long description but some easing into instead. like how I didn't even notice it was a 2-year time skip and am confused how she suddenly joined the military like what was the thought process behind that. but these might already be discussed later I'm just waiting to horde some more passes
I really think this story has so much potential. I like it so far. I think if the author could improve a few things, it would be more appealing to readers. First of all, the tenses need to be unified, either past or present. Some editing needs to be done as there are many grammatical mistakes. I think there should be more character development, maybe backgrounds, goals, motivation. Something that kinda bothered me was the fact that the author uses both first and last name every time he talks about a characters. I think one is enough, also descriptions are lacking. Great work though, I am sure you will improve with time!! Gambatte kudasai!!
This novel is your typical face-slapping novel. They introduce new arrogant and proud characters everytime the previous one was been faceslapped. Concept is quite unoriginal, but why do i rate this 4+ stars?Because they turn this Eastern Fantasy story into a palatable novel that can be enjoyed from what would otherwise be known as a cliche novel.The author (or translator/editor) does a good job with the writing in order to make it enjoyable. Only novel I can think of on here that has achieved an similar effect was King of Gods - which utilizes great writing. Summary: The MC is a godking that has been worshipped by the whole world and was reborn into a young masters body. He is constantly looked down upon but eventually pulls through with his profound knowledge and cultivation methods. Enemies or the lesser friendly equivalent, constantly feel regret for their actions when the MC is unassuming. Really makes you angry when they act like and on the flip side, happy when they get taught a lesson.
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