My Little Pony: Equestria Girls: Volted Timeline

Wow! Nice to read

I've been reading this on and off for a few years now. This was one of my guilty pleasures.To be completely honest, the story was a mess. The author would forget about things that were said to be very important, all of the antagonists where the same, and there was practically no character development.There was also that last chapter. There is too much to comment on when it comes to the last chapter. It was incredibly rushed. I mean, the biggest, baddest antagonist was defeated in one hit? There were also drastic time-skips at the end to excuse the power scaling that was going on. I forget because it's been so long, but how many chapters did the first month of the game take up?Another thing is the whole explanation of God's Domain. Creating additions three dimensional spaces? If there's going to be a sequel I can understand why there would be such an explanation and why they started another whole journey. If there is not going to be a sequel, I could have really done without it. It really just got me curious.I'd say my favorite part of the story, and the reason I stuck with it for so long even though it was a mess, would be the world and system. I really don't understand how the world and power system can be so well thought out when the plot is such a mess.There is so much to talk about when it comes to the power system. The levels are complemented by tiers, which come along with their own intricacies. There are skills that are divided by tier along with combat techniques divided by rarity. The equipment system is also very well thought out with the different rarities and level limits. I found the city/NPC systems interesting too.As a word of warning, I don't think I could binge read this because it's so repetitive. It mostly maintained my interest because I was caught up with it, so I had a break after reading a few chapters.TLDR: The plot is a predictable mess, but because of all the interesting stuff that gets brought out, it's still a fun read.

Its better than most novels on here but I would not call it a masterpiece. The writing is ok but nothing where I just want to keep reading. Its not immersive at all. I had to drop the novel at around Chapter 20 because reading the novel is just not engaging in my opinion.Kind of feeling bad to give this a negative review because you can see that the author put a lot of effort into his creation. But I just got bored. Its just not mine sorry.

I love how it turned out in the first chapter, the writing quality was good and the world background was superb, I really like it. I want to know more just by reading the other chapters. There is a potential for this to become popular, nice work fellow author!

There nothing wrong with the writing or the general plot, but it's made unreadable by the stupid idea to make the mc and the princess who didn't give a crap about him before friends. You can tell the writer is shipping the two because the mc suddenly thinks about how they are "similar" blah blah blah more crap about how they are both cold. It's just annoying to have to read the super obvious shipping between the mc and a princess who's came out of bloody nowhere. It's pretty good in general but I'm done reading this novel because it's going to piss me off every time I read anything related to it, and there's definitely going to be tons of stuff related to it just looking at the cliche style of the systems missions and how they met.

Yup! plz more updates.Update as much as you can. it will be very beneficial to you as well as the reader. Don't keep us in suspense.Good luck for your novel.

Waiting for the updates author. The book is different and I can't guess what is going to happen next. Recommended to all those who like to read something different

your story is good you just have to become better at this I mean you could add many thing in this you can make him rainbow something like medical fox with the power of ninetales fox but he can go beyond that with your imagination