This book is so much better than the other books you wrote. I don’t think you should let the criticism get to you but use it as a tool to learn and not drop this novel from it like the last novel.
this novel is underated, and the reason is probably because the title, tags and sinopse, if you look at those you think this novel will be about playing a realistic game with OP cheats, but this description could not be more wrong, i mean the system and game aspects of the novel is so irrelevant that we dont even know the stats of anyone Mc included, this novel is more about family bonds, is about the MC learning how to be a responsible adult and learning how to take care of his family, the whole journey is focused on that, all those other things like the system and game are basically secondary, the fights of the novel also sucks so i think thats why this novel is underated.
Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.
Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.
Interesting premise, and a pretty cool 'legendary class'.
I feel like I'm reading a romance-type novel that has been put into a video-game shell. Kind of like "Pride and prejudice and zombies".
Not that I'm complaining, I like it so far and I'm only 2 chapters in :)
Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.
(Also we are around the same ranking - my book is 'My Necromancer Class', so I thought I'd check out your book out and I'm enjoying it, keep it up!)
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Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.
I feel like I'm reading a romance-type novel that has been put into a video-game shell. Kind of like "Pride and prejudice and zombies".
Not that I'm complaining, I like it so far and I'm only 2 chapters in :)
Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.
(Also we are around the same ranking - my book is 'My Necromancer Class', so I thought I'd check out your book out and I'm enjoying it, keep it up!)
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