My Last Time as a Human

Just average, went through mtl until the end, still thought stopping a few times. A few annoying moments such as repeating the same situation from point of view of MC and then other characters, just this alone could shorten the novel by 30% for sure and maybe even more. Another repetite moment is when optic brain solves everything, as opponent does something MC analysis through optic brain and just solves it, and its done. Moreover, another annoying thing is author forgetting parts of the story, not often but around 3-5 times, still impacts the experience. The ending was quite abrupt and anticlimactic, I am sure without all that repetite stuff the novel would have lasted much longer with better ending.I quite like the whole concept of assistance from a super brain in form of optic brain or some form of artificial intelligence, the best to date is Warlock of the Magus World where MC is already intelligent and the A.I. chip is just giving wings to the tiger, but in this case the writting is lacking. Still good effort

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love the story, the character interaction is extremely funny, especially the father and son duoalso love the 'trap' aspecthopefully in the future mc would accept the fact that he is a trap and would troll other people

The main reason I love this novel so much is mainly the premise and the fact the demon lord and hero recarnated together near each other and also the jokes get me sometimes and lastly I really enjoy the characters and how the story is going so a 5/5 for me personally.

Love the story.  Can't wait for the next update. This story has a good pace it is neither to fast or slow,  It fully develops it's characters, plot, background, etc.

In commemoration of reaching 10 chapters, here is my final review of this.It's set up like a personal blog but in novel format.Read it and interact with the author as if this was a blog and you definitely won't complain about it not being a "novel". It's not even a novel idea but a journal is essentially a blog; just more personal and reflective than others.The main character of this story could be just about anyone. In this case, it's the author himself.Through his sharing we readers also come to realize that we are main characters of our own lives. While we may think our lives are boring, they aren't to others.It's a journal-book style blog written by a high school teenager. Writing quality? As I've mentioned before, and will mention again: It's not meant to be a professional story, grammar and spelling mistakes don't need to be perfect, but the author does his best to deliver and his loyal readers devour it all up.This is my final review. Thank you.

not to my tastes at all, pretty disappointed QI would add a novel like this. Sexual assault isn't something to joke and make light of like this novel does.