My Girlfriend's Mom Is Very Seductive

Dave yelled out," Zebeck you piece of garbage this is the last favor I ever owe you,".

"Hey! Wait up!" I shouted after her.

My sincere apologies,

"Ha ha ha, this is my masterpiece, the abundant kindness turned into ruthlessness after being mixed with anger

Incredible book, I could see that you already had in mind how to trace the story until you reach the current character of the mc. There were some points at the beginning of the story that bothered me, mainly the excessive naivety of the protagonist. But I hope you really don't let go your book halfway author, works like yours are really rare, with an intelligent villain and don't be cattle. I'll be following your work, good luck!Google translator

The story is quite good, with expectations to see how the protagonist continues his path, it hurts the slower updates that my love life,but each chapter is enjoyed and that is something that I consider very top in the novel, recommended

I won't comment on the story as I've only read half of the first chapter. Instead I'd like to offer some advice. I was taken aback by the writing quality which seemed more like a proper book than a webnovel story but that's also the issue. The writing quality is too good/different for this website that most people won't actually want to read it so I recommend instead posting the story to RR where readers are more used to and willing to read this level of writing otherwise I believe this story will be buried and forgotten on this website.