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1. Writing quality is upto standards, just that there are some mistakes here and there in spellings like calling a male her and a female him.
Some sentence structures are not properly structured...
like you can change, "There is not something will happen to him" to
" Don't worry, Nothing will happen to him "etcetc.
2. Story is also developed well till now....nothing much to say, you can see the gist of the story from the synopsis and read it....
3. Character design is also detailed, nobody seems like 2 dimensional character...though you can try giving some characters some inner thoughts and could also give them some backstories to make them appear more real to the readers.
4. For now updating stability is also well, as can seen from 8 ch/ week on the front page.
5. Don't know much about world background....I mean it's just starting afterall......
Overall nice work from Author San.
I rarely read novels in this genre but I like this one.
The storytelling keeps you interested and the plot looks solid.
I'll definitely recommend reading this!
The plot and writing is bland at best and still wondering why the mc must have to be japanese and his personality wasn't that of a striking man he is either. The constant
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is really unnecessary and the first chapter could be make up better. The author didn't do daily update like what his profile would say so I don't really likes where it was going.
I won't stop you all who reading this from trying this book, it's just a matter of preference. So much for first winner of wpc.
Good luck for the author tho, don't take this review to heart, try reading some great book out there, even there was plenty on this website, best of luck.
The plot is great as are the ways the author describes the characters and setting.
Great work!