Wow with 55 reviews this got selected Impressive!!!While some novels got over 100 reviews!! It is not selected!!!Well what can I expect with an idiot editor!!!
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The story is well written and enjoyable to read. The only things I don't really like are the blatant foreshadowing, but it seems to have gone away in the more recent chapters. I also don't really like reading the female character descriptions, as there is a large focus on their curves and breasts. There seems to be quite a big plot that will show its head sooner or later, but I can already tell the main basis of it through the not so skillful use of foreshadowing. The main background of the story is, while not completely original, a refreshing twist on the usual VR stories. Overall a good read, I am excited to see where the story goes.
This is an amazing novel. I'll support the author and recommend the readers to read this work.Keep writing and updating with this same spirit. ALL THE BEST
Almost 5 stars for me, the only thing I hate is the update speed 1 ch/week that's too long.At the moment : 76 chapters. I like the mc willingness to die and use his cheat how he cheese the hell out of it, others won't use that cheat to keep it a secret.The story has A LOT of potential, Spoiler " the mc is building his base and dungeon, starting to build up his own army and " farming" resources.
We are not told much about this world, everything seems forced and unexpected. It would be best to teach us more about the world in a prologue. Some words are misspelled but it does not distract from the story. Other words like ”little” is changed into ”lil” which messes with the story. It would be better to either not use it at all or use the normal spelling.
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