Hey love! I just read your story and its amazing work. Keep going i would love to read more of your hard work. It's an interesting and quiet catchy plot.
Well. This is qidian.. Here you can find anything.. But mostly trash novels.. I am serious! I say 90% of these translated novels are not like how they are actually rated! If you can prove me wrong then i shall change my name.. Leaving the PF picture ofcourse.. So back to review.. Don't read this.. Its a rip of version of 'My wife is a beautiful CEO'.. I shall be racist, well a little.. You know.. Chinese like to duplicate stuff a lot.. Like you never had that experience buying some stuff from china and just to get rip off version of what you wanted.. Lel.. But qidian.. Up here you will see that they even copy amongst themselves!!! XD.. You say inspiration and all that bull****? Nope.. I say its in their blood.. Now i please take my apologise if i offended you.. Trust me.. 70% novels in qidian are full of racism.. Thats why they are having so hard time trying to translate them in webnovel.. They gotta verifying if that novel have 'racism' element or not.. I think i just went off the topic.. But blame *140 characters* requirment.. Otherwise my review would've been like this.."Utter trash novel writen by a poor neet who have no idea how real world works so he is copying others idea to make a living for himself."
This is really well written the more I read the more I want, and I really can't wait to see how it progresses in the future. I wouldn't mind buying it that's how much I like it.
This is a very interesting Novel I love the plot and especially the virtual reality system, I also love how shameless the mc is and am looking forward to seeing him steamroll people. I just hope that he doesn't start chasing after girls so heavily especially when it will lead to a lot of minor problems instead of trying to make his own empire especially since he took out loans and will have a lot of issues irl if he doesn't focus on progress.
0w0 I felt really bad that a nice story like this was sitting here rotting with no reviews, so I rated it!1. Writing quality is really good (as stated above)2. Stability of updates is good, if you count out the occasional few day gap.3. Story development is ok, but I think you can do better4. Character design is a hard one, but I personally like the ring & stuff so yeah.5. I don't even know what the hell is world background, so no comments on that.
The Story is very fascinating and thank you Author for not making it a Harem 😊Grammar could use a little bit of polishing. Also, a little bit more character and world build up would be nice. Other than that this novel is superb! Great Job Author.
I walked out of the room and went to my study, I wanted to figure out who she really was and I wanted to know why I was so happy that she was staying longer. I went to my bookshelf and checked all of the books, I couldn't find anything in all of the books. So I went to the library and checked all of the books there. I finally found the two books that I needed, I walked back to my study room and sat down at my desk and started to read.
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