From the start to the recent chapters the story has flowed quite well with no jarring plots, its been written brilliantly, the world building has been done well as well but has to have a qualitative upgrade once more worlds are introduced, the human cultivation system while it might draw in readers because of the new beast system but is actually quite limiting, with barely the good soul world bearers having a chance at a high level and the rest having to accept mediocrity, body refining cultivation has now been introduced which is a good start already and with the mc being of a stronger race im guessing he'll also cultivate with that races system and bloodline which again would be a stronger system, when his bloodline awakens i hope the bloodline itself grants him a way to cultivate the way the celestia race does atleastFor a book which the author says will only have about 1000 chapters we're alraedy almost 30% through with only about a year gone and no actual personality change in the mc, but just teenage growth, if the mc doesnt change much this story will somehow end up with an mc with a teenagers personality, no special personalities like being a sadist, womanizer, cold, evil,lazy, chilled out,and the chaotic good ones etcWhat we have is a person who nice and at best hot blooded for battle which is too basic for an mc hes basically got aside characters personalityTHe side charactets dont pose much attachment and are disposable in the sense the mc will leave them behind, hopefully that changes when he reaches a stronger race and makes friendsCompleting this story in 700 chapters kinda feels jarring, i expect multiple time skips to achieve that which i dont want to see in quick succesion, hopefully the author decides to keep taking it at a slow pace and extend the novel to about 1500 chapters atleastTHe time flow needs a revamp, with the soul powers issue dealt with, and body refining being a long term thing, we dont need a day to day story, time can flow faster, if i ignore everything and just look at how at almost 300 chapters we've only had almost 1 year passing i must say its one of the world time passage sequences written, with there being no reason to have the mc start growing to the top in just a few years, and with him potentially having a long life span, the time definitely has to flow fasterIn essence except these minor issues to be dealt with the story itself is quite nice and has good potential the only thing to avoid i guess is an over fixation on the human race and making it reach the top, too many books have done that, and frankly books that dont focus on races to take up and focus on the mc and his companions and stuff as people more have a better plot
I mainly like the novel but the author's level of racism towards other countries is extreme. There are times when racism is so extreme that it is gross to even read ... gross.
in my opinion this novel Synopsis, is the most interesting from all this group of the Pilot Read, there is so much to enjoy and have fun in this story, very hope that it will be pick up for the Trial Read, and we can really enjoy a good 40 chapters, and who knows! it may be pick there for a series too, from all of them this is the very best :)
The story is overall very good I'm still waiting for other characters and settings to be introduced like his parents, the guys in the company and the vampire world
1. this book is murdering the english language2. interesting characters at first, but no development3. we are just dropped into a world, there's no information4. the story is not badconclusion: it is readable and zan be a good book, if you have free time and nothing to read, but to absolutely say that you have to read this book I wouldn't go that far.
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