This! people! this is the Story about the System that you should definitely give a try! This story has a Fantastic Premise and unlike what the name suggests this is not the typical story about fantasy with System like power system. this is an actual Scifi story about Technology and how it can be used to do productive things and benefit Humanity.
Though I love this story I can't help but see some typos and mistakes here and there along with a Strange choice of words that could be easily fixed. overall this story is easy to understand if you don't various appropriately placed scientific words.
Since that mistake can be easily fixed and doesn't cause a major interruption to the story combine with my own limited knowledge of Grammar I think this one still deserves the five star on writing.
give it a try and you will see how Great this story is.
Beautifully written. The plot develops well throughout each read and the picture created is undeniably beautiful with great use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole.
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Though I love this story I can't help but see some typos and mistakes here and there along with a Strange choice of words that could be easily fixed. overall this story is easy to understand if you don't various appropriately placed scientific words.
Since that mistake can be easily fixed and doesn't cause a major interruption to the story combine with my own limited knowledge of Grammar I think this one still deserves the five star on writing.
give it a try and you will see how Great this story is.