My Demon Pet System

Author's notes:

No heartbreaking or encouraging descriptions for this work. I'm confident that if you'll give it a try, it will satisfy you.
I'll post 2 chapters/day, unless unexpected events and I'll give it my all everyday to write and edit chapters, making them enjoyable to read.

Needless to say, I hope you guys will support my work through the WSA, voting for it and helping it climb the ranks.

Constructive comments and reviews will always be appreciated.
Have a talk with me via my social profiles (links at the end of the synopsis).

I think this author is swinging for the fences!
The quality of his novels is high, it is not the usual mainstream or poor quality thing that the books of
this platform very often offer.
We have to give importance and reward those who deserve it as Immanioripse and his wonderful books.
It really has great potential.
Keep goin on and don't stop believing please.

I just loved it! Though your language is a bit harsh but I love the plot and the way you explained. Book cover is also very cool and I kinda like it. Great work author-kun! I appreciate it!

REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean)

Interesting system novel I've never really seen before. Unique concept, great characters (though not really my type of MC lol) and awesome writing quality.

Keep it up, author!

Read all available chapters and so far the novel is good, not amaizing but still good. I have few problems with the novel:

1. World Background (so far):
1.1 This is my personal opinion but there are only 2 nations (factions as author calls them). One is on our continent the other on the enemy continent and that's it. For me that's close to nothing. There is Bronzewood ( or something like that) where MC comes from, there is village/town/city i forgot the name of because it was included in like 2 chapters, and then there is Godhaven (capital). Not only is the whole continent a single country, but is seems that even that country is small. MC reached the capital in like 2 hours or so from his godforsaken farm.

2. Story Development (so far):
2.1 This is my personal opinion (again), for me the development is too slow. Maybe that's authors' idea and it might pick up speed in later chapters, but still for 36 chapters he found out very little and basic information about the world he is in and travevled to Godhaven (capital city). His first mission was to capture demon in 48 hours and there are still more than 20 hours left, meaning 36 chapters descirbe only 20-30 hours.
2.2 The other think for me is that battles are too basic, there is only 1 skill that demon can use (I know thats only for now but still...) and demons from same species alway have the same abilities. You (author) could have put Mutation where the demon/pet mutates and gains diffrent skills, there are other ideas but you get the point - more uniqueness.

3. Character Design (so far):
3.1 This is my personal opinion (AGAIN), the character is too rash on making decisions, especially about rescuing the princess. Did he fall for her already? I know he says something about not being a 'Coward', but in my opinon that's whole diffrent level of 'Bravery' bordering 'Stupidity' and 'Simping' . That's just the begining so he may evolve, but that;s what i saw up until now.

That's pretty much it all my ranting. Its still good, but yea..

P.S. Good luck with the novel author.

I haven't actually read this, but given that this author has 2 other novels that he didn't bother to finish and didn't even warn his readers if he was just taking a break through the comment section or an additional chapter idk if it is safe to start reading this since he might just drop it out of nowhere without mentioning anything.
Aside from that the synopsis looks interesting so I'll probably give it a try anyway.
If the author keeps posting chapters without dropping this and the story is good I'll edit my review and score later.

Immersive and wholesome. Those are the two words they come into my mind while reading this book. Right from the beginning the author just builds up this amazing world that comes to life as you continue reading. I highly recommend this book to everyone