REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean)
I just loved it! Though your language is a bit harsh but I love the plot and the way you explained. Book cover is also very cool and I kinda like it. Great work author-kun! I appreciate it!
Interesting system novel I've never really seen before. Unique concept, great characters (though not really my type of MC lol) and awesome writing quality.
No heartbreaking or encouraging descriptions for this work. I'm confident that if you'll give it a try, it will satisfy you.
I'll post 2 chapters/day, unless unexpected events and I'll give it my all everyday to write and edit chapters, making them enjoyable to read.
Needless to say, I hope you guys will support my work through the WSA, voting for it and helping it climb the ranks.
Constructive comments and reviews will always be appreciated.
Have a talk with me via my social profiles (links at the end of the synopsis).
I think this author is swinging for the fences!
The quality of his novels is high, it is not the usual mainstream or poor quality thing that the books of
this platform very often offer.
We have to give importance and reward those who deserve it as Immanioripse and his wonderful books.
It really has great potential.
Keep goin on and don't stop believing please.
This was one of the best books i have ever read and i hope the author keeps on doing stuff like this great writing, awesome storyline all in all incredible hreat job
I read all the story so far and what I found is one of the most promising novel on the app. Our mc's system is not a cheat coming from who know which God but a true, hidden and mysterious system that works beneath the surface of things.
The fact is, I really hope this goes high in ranks. As a reader and reviewer I'm sick to see the same stories always on top.
need something fresh .. kudos!
Writing Quality: Good and readable
Updating Stability: Superb and always updated!
Story Development: Nice pacing
Character Design: It's nice and clean
World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.
Popular Reviews
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean)
Keep it up, author!
No heartbreaking or encouraging descriptions for this work. I'm confident that if you'll give it a try, it will satisfy you.
I'll post 2 chapters/day, unless unexpected events and I'll give it my all everyday to write and edit chapters, making them enjoyable to read.
Needless to say, I hope you guys will support my work through the WSA, voting for it and helping it climb the ranks.
Constructive comments and reviews will always be appreciated.
Have a talk with me via my social profiles (links at the end of the synopsis).
The quality of his novels is high, it is not the usual mainstream or poor quality thing that the books of
this platform very often offer.
We have to give importance and reward those who deserve it as Immanioripse and his wonderful books.
It really has great potential.
Keep goin on and don't stop believing please.
The fact is, I really hope this goes high in ranks. As a reader and reviewer I'm sick to see the same stories always on top.
need something fresh .. kudos!
Updating Stability: Superb and always updated!
Story Development: Nice pacing
Character Design: It's nice and clean
World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.