My Cricket Career In Another World

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Long review Ok so this novel has 100 supporters already but what’s with the plot mc is literally a side character for all the free chaps……..and the plot is just annoying though I’ve seen similar plot from other trail read novels this one just drives me away as the motive for the adoptive daughter for accusing the mc a old man of molesting her is to achieve more fame some shallow minded character introduced right off the bat but anyway is 3 am and I’m just rambling cause of sleepinessShort review Trash characters and the main character is a vegetable for the free to read chapters

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Hello, a few words from the authorThis is a slow-paced story, please be patient with :) and this is a rework of my second novel Tribe Online.since this is a game novel, I will try to balance 40% time within the game, 40% time about his real life, and the remaining 20% is about competitive scene, e-sport, and others. I will try to balance it like this.Criticisms are welcomed, but sometimes (or maybe most of the time) people think that sh*t-talking is being "harsh" to critic the author while actually, it's not a criticism, you are being rude. I will delete such a review if there's one. thanks and hope you enjoy the story.

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Good efforts at the age of 13. The content was good. When are you going to publish your second chapter👍 One advice I would like to give you that please align your phone paragraphs.Wish you good luck.

The endearing call sent a jot down He Bao's spine, making her jump with the unexpectedness.

"Ren-kun!" Emi, a jōnin skilled in chakra sensing, sensed the disturbance in Ren's chakra. She body flickered out from the house and stopped right next to her son.