My Corpse is Bohemian

Im in chapter 25 and the translation is bad. Does it improve in later chapters?

The concept is intriguing, a coming-of-age story featuring a zombie少女 who seeks yang energy to maintain vitality, with a balanced mix of horror, comedy, romance, and thriller elements tailored for young adults. However, there are a couple of issues in the storytelling:

1. The male lead, initially described as sweet, unfortunately turns out to be a controlling figure. Despite her direct requests, he displays possessiveness, distrust, and even stalks her by monitoring her phone and invading her privacy. His efforts to confine her and limit her interactions with others create a problematic dynamic. It would have been more compelling if the heroine were emotionless, content to use him for sustenance, but the author seems to want readers to empathize with him.

2. The main character's background doesn't match her premise. As a zombie with extensive life experiences, one would expect her to be wise, knowledgeable, and have a vast network. Instead, she is portrayed as an 18-year-old with limited life阅历, which makes her seem relatable rather than符合 her initial portrayal. The love interest's admiration should have been depicted as a fleeting adolescent infatuation that she easily dismisses, given her calculated and pragmatic nature.

Overall, the execution of these aspects falls short of what the premise promised.

Wow the story line is awsome. I can't wait for the second book as the first book's cliffy ending gave a shiver down my excited reader mind. Perfectly nailed it.

The story is good, but the chapters are much too short and randomly split and things are dragged out. Updates are very slow, too, so better wait until it is completed before starting to read