Awesome characters liked the story progression up until the ryoji temple arc because it seemed to be so rushed, all the guys should have been taken to the temple and the girls taken in as ninja possibly made allies that way. overall a great genre to take inspiration from just need a d&d type board game to run so many possibilities and roll with the best story but no matter how you look at it having time to mature a storyline is always best concerning quality other than that loved the immersive storytelling great job authorsan. ๐ ๐
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Would have neen five stars if he didnโt make it feel like it was strong from start mc with all that soul power and all. I personally prefer a strong from start mc than weak to strong
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Pretty good. The way people act and talk is kinda weird, cringy at times. Itโs supposed to be in modern America, yet there are people acting like there in an anime or medieval times. I also donโt like how Alex doesnโt use a weapon. The martial arts is cool, most times people just over look it and focus on magic, swords, and guns. But this is a bit over the top. Havenโt read the whole thing yet, but itโs pretty good so far.
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