there's something wrong with MC brain in my opinion, his previous body owner dead because of murder, and after he gain system and small gain in cultivation he flaunt his beautiful mom, sister, maid around city. it's like asking for trouble. it's cliche story most protagonis donkey brain in novel and he doesn't realize he's source of trouble itself.
This is my kind of genre. Fell in love with this book right from the beginning. This is one of the best book I've read on Webnovel so far. Keep up the good work.
What can I say, thats one of the most amazing novels i know on Webnovel. It has everything a cultured man can dream of.... beauties, dragons, and dual cultivation...
* Writing quality is superb, sometimes I doubt that its his 3rd language. Smooth to read and understand. Lemons have great details, author knows hot to move your lil bro (with words you pe rv...).
*As of chapter 70, the story goes with a good pace. We know more and more about the world surrounding our MC. There is a big secret that needs more explanation, but it only pushes our imagination to more speculations.
*Character design, to be honest, if you read what author did with mc's mommy, you will be shocked and trust me, in a good way. I read only harems, and yet that was something even i did not expect, genius move by author. Beside mommy we meet his older sis, and a house maid. All of them are great with different personalities. What I want to say is - winc est here feels great.
*Update stability, from what I know we will get 2 chaps a day, so its very solid imo.
*World background. Mc is a cultivator who uses QI, while the rest of the world uses mana ( inferior power ), reason? no idea. Still interesting, I bet there is a good plot behind it.
*Story moves in a decent pace, not to slow or fast. Autor puts a lot of care into his characters, they dont feel one dimensional. You can start a chapter, have lots of fun and just be sad that you have to wait another day for next update.
Now the most important part.
NO NTR!!!!
NO YURI !!!!
Im a man of culture, and would not recommend some random disgusting stuff to my fellow daoists.
Follow the culture, and give this book a try. I put my left ball on that, and thats like half of my life.
Thanks for reading my review.
Give this novel a chance, you wont be dissapointed!
The plot is..... okay I guess? Honestly that's the best way I can describe it. Chapters are short and most of it is filled with nonsense and peanut gallery filler so that nothing ever really happens. The MC has 5 wives early, and every single one of them has input on every sentence the MC says or does. So a chapter usually just reads as:
MC: let's do this
Wife 1: yeah let's do it
Wife 2: sure anything you want
Wife 3: I always wanted to do that
Wife 4: I can't wait
Wife 5: I'll grab the snacks
And that repeats in the chapter for literally every sentence or action. Run into an antagonist? Not only do the wives all talk, so do the bad guys, and so does everyone who sees it. I had to drop it because 10 chapters worth of content was spread to 100 chapters due to all the filler.
Man I love this story but the way you write, it's just too uptight, I mean who talk to an enemy with that level of elegance, it's like you are writing a play for opera or something, and there is that sentence that comes again and again "thrilled to explore this new world and experience everything it has to offer." this sentence is almost every chapter before c85 and sometimes it is more than one time in a chapter, and there is this sentence or line that you right in every new paragraph "there heart filled with anticipation and thriller for what to come" I mean come on man don't be so uptight. And don't try too much. The story is good and has way more potential than what you are presenting and please if possible change that uptight writing style. I hope this novel will become one of the best on the platform.
I tried to justify giving this more stars, but i can't bring myself to. I will detail on this below.The quality of the writing is very poor, with words that are misstyped and mismatched that ruin the context.Characters don't stay in character and move from one attitude to the next, without any justification for the transition.The dialogues are poorly matched to the atmosphere and toopic, often using formal speech poorly, thus ruining the immersion. There are decent things as well, such as the world building, the theme and relationships, but too many things were copied from Culti online that it does not seem original.Same MC name, Same dragon name, Similar physique, same power system so far. It's just hard to apreciate something unoriginal that seems like a cheap copy.Coming back to the bad points, this novel could use a full rewrite and edit. Too many mistakes to recover by this point.
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What can I say, thats one of the most amazing novels i know on Webnovel. It has everything a cultured man can dream of.... beauties, dragons, and dual cultivation...
* Writing quality is superb, sometimes I doubt that its his 3rd language. Smooth to read and understand. Lemons have great details, author knows hot to move your lil bro (with words you pe rv...).
*As of chapter 70, the story goes with a good pace. We know more and more about the world surrounding our MC. There is a big secret that needs more explanation, but it only pushes our imagination to more speculations.
*Character design, to be honest, if you read what author did with mc's mommy, you will be shocked and trust me, in a good way. I read only harems, and yet that was something even i did not expect, genius move by author. Beside mommy we meet his older sis, and a house maid. All of them are great with different personalities. What I want to say is - winc est here feels great.
*Update stability, from what I know we will get 2 chaps a day, so its very solid imo.
*World background. Mc is a cultivator who uses QI, while the rest of the world uses mana ( inferior power ), reason? no idea. Still interesting, I bet there is a good plot behind it.
*Story moves in a decent pace, not to slow or fast. Autor puts a lot of care into his characters, they dont feel one dimensional. You can start a chapter, have lots of fun and just be sad that you have to wait another day for next update.
Now the most important part.
NO NTR!!!!
NO YURI !!!!
Im a man of culture, and would not recommend some random disgusting stuff to my fellow daoists.
Follow the culture, and give this book a try. I put my left ball on that, and thats like half of my life.
Thanks for reading my review.
Give this novel a chance, you wont be dissapointed!
MC: let's do this
Wife 1: yeah let's do it
Wife 2: sure anything you want
Wife 3: I always wanted to do that
Wife 4: I can't wait
Wife 5: I'll grab the snacks
And that repeats in the chapter for literally every sentence or action. Run into an antagonist? Not only do the wives all talk, so do the bad guys, and so does everyone who sees it. I had to drop it because 10 chapters worth of content was spread to 100 chapters due to all the filler.