I was searching for cultivation novels, and stumbled upon this story. Seeing it was written by someone who had already written two great novels I gave it a chance( after reading the tags). Within the other story’s there a background given at the start, Meant to help readers understand the back story. The same was done here i just their wasn’t an in-depth explanation.(although I hope the author will go in depth at a later point in time) Moving onto character design I feel that for someone who is supposed to have “lived” for billions of years, he would know how the world of this story works and be a less trusting person I understand the slave girl but he keeps helping people randomly through the story. There are other times when he shows a personality befitting of his age like when he try’s to scam the guild, but at other times he shows a nieave personality like helping characters who are not really needed to progress the story. Although I feel the author will eventually put him in situations where these characters will be useful, their is currently no use to them other than saying his resources which could be used to further his character as a whole.
I read this up to chapter 23.I think the author did a good job in writing this book. The quality is excellent, and the writing is neat, and everything flowed nicely. I can see that the author is a fan of sci-fi and did some homework as well. Although it's still too early to tell about the story development, so far, the story is moving on nicely. It was not too rushed or too slow. I quite enjoy reading this novel.Anyway, good luck, author.
Every word has a deep meaning. Very suspenseful sci-fi. I like this story. The author uses language that is quite easy for reader to understand. Fighting 😇
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