My Boyfriend Is An Octopus

Both of his hands instinctively clutch his head in pain, and the bad memories from the past event flow like a water coming through his brain.

'Thank god that's over.' I thought with a loud sigh.

مثل خنگا به شاخه ی درختی که بغلش کرده بودم خیره شدم.

[Release it now]. -The soft voice begun to speak to him again.

I hate when mc and his sister is from same parents but somehow his sister would become very op after Being sick .and without cheat mc would a miserable person .his sister would be taken away by some powerfull people as teacher he would be look down upon even beaten but after mc gain power he would help them like dog and save them because they were his sister teacher. I hate this burden sisters or brother. it's good in real life but for fiction ... nah

Being familiar with the author's work, I can say that it is different from how his works usually are. The idea of skating used in gang fights is not half bad, but I hope the author prevents flawed world-building and insane plot armours.The initialization of the novel is good. I hope the author keeps it up. I don't seem to have noticed a major flaw in the story, but I can say that the concept of dyna blades is hyped up right from the beginning, which can lead to problems later.

Translation quality and character design/ writing is good. The only issue I have is that I don't understand where the author is going with this story, which is why I gave a 1 to story development. So far we don't have any clue of the world nor do we know where the story is heading. The synopsis doesn't help either. I'm currently at chapter 20 and I'll read till chapter 25 to 30 if nothing happens I'll drop. if it gets better I'll give an update