A story made of cliched plot points. The MC being a reborn world jumper, the parents poor, and the father a blindly trusting fool to name a few. I'm amazed that the author can shove so many crap ways to show the dad being an idiot in one chapter. I'm stopping my reading at chapter 39 since I just can't take the crap contained by it anymore. I know the market is flooded and you have to be a bit nationalist with your leanings but this novel seems to exhibit how the average citizen's interaction with the government is always like dealing with a corrupt official. And the antagonist is a 5-6 year old girl referred to as "Lolita". No doubt she'll start loving the MC at some point soon. It's just bad. Author should stop writting this and lay out the plot trajectory for the first Arc and restart it from the beginning with the same world and characters. The place and some people have a good setup but are handled badly so the story is just not worth the time to read or translate.
Definitely is a novel of a much higher quality than other novels. Im 100% looking forward to where this goes and to the day this novel appears as part of the top 10 novels.
The story has potenital But you can't make a bunch of OP pover in novelHe is demon in human body and has a higest cultivatio grade And thats okey and niceBut the problem is sistemSistem is too muchAnd story development is too fast He has a strong body And has a seled meridians Its a good startBut he didint get hunted by king or sectAnd he is calamity There si a lot of thing that need do remake 1. Take a slover pace Dont go to fast with story 2. He is to smart He dosen't have a comon sense. Thats okey but later he went to mental sect way/where noting is explained 3. You have to litle desprition about some thingI read it till you did start with a systemI didint read it laterBut this is my honest optionI know that you are 13 old So dont take offens but take a slover pace and read some novelWach how other autors write ther novelAlso read a coment Trust me you can learn a lot Of cos read a good coment where readers a brutaly honest and a spamsMy native isitn english Do a dont wach a gramars As long a can read it and unerstandIm okeyDont take offens but i belive if you want to be a beter author Then you need to work a lot
This is by far One of the best if not the best Harry Potter fan fiction I've read, all I ask of you is to not drop it... But if you do have a solid reason to do so I won't/can't blame you... Pls keep this personality of his it is very different in all the others that I have read and the one where Harry is in Slytherin is fairly rare so I give my support to you!!! (even though it may not mean much)
I personally know the author so I'm trying to be as unbiased as possible. This is a good story. The narration is well enough and there aren't any glaring problems with the writing. Some awkward sentences are here and there but I mostly enjoyed this. Hopefully, everyone else will too.
The novel is not bad at all for what it is, if you came here for R18 stuff than you good.. writing quality its ok,,, world development well didn’t see any as of chapter 20 so I don’t really count it it’s still early,,,, update stability we get around 2 chapter per day so really good for me... all in all as author is new and English is not his first language this is a well deserved 4 stars.... If mc was op would have been a personal 5 stars (I like op mc) but well mc gotta struggle... mc probably will be strong later on but I don’t get that invested in R18 novel to read around 100 chapters before I get my badass mc.. well thanks and author keep on the hard work...
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