Overall, it is pretty meh. He has a somewhat overpowered ability and he seems to still get the luckiest skill pickups possible. The translation of the names are terrible. If you can't come up with good western names at the very least just leave them as Chinese.
This novel has done several things that makes it great. 1st the introduction makes since , is reasonable,established the mc purpose and avoids standard cliches that I have grown to find irksome bc I know these cliches usally lead the mc in these novel having hollowes desires such as desiring power bc my clan discarded me excedra which usually quickly becomes irrelevant and kinda of bland.2nd The system is greatI like the fact that the system isnt solely focused on his on development, and to be hounest I'm a bit tired of reading system novels were the mc drools over option that will make them super powerful. It aspects like this that breaks the balance if novels and makes me question indivduals IQs. So for that concentration of power to be lacking is refreshing.(as side the system is kind of sassy/funny and I am aware that as a system novel the mc does have a huge advantage over others) 3rd the world building is decent I understand the dynamics of the world he is reincarnated into, the characters arent one noted cliches, and there quite a few characters that are still being explored developed. and since this is a new novel that's bound to have alot of recurring characters it's only in the nature of the setting to .take time to develop.ultimately I would recommend this novel eventhough it might not make you fall in love with automatically, it certainly wont cause you to blow a gasket
A funny use of the norse mythology and the others with a fast pacing rather nice if compared with many other novels way too slow in a rather complicated world where gods, magic and cultivation are mixedThough you really need an editor to correct the mistakes because sometimes it can be hard to understand what you mean, I also saw that you repeated some sentences twice on some chapters. So an editor could help you correct what maybe you won't see when doing it yourself (don't forget that your readers will be happy to help you if you need us for that).And also it's only my opinion but 6 and 10 years old is kind of too young for what happens to them even if they are more mature or grown up.Keep going and good luck Mr/Ms Author 😁
Learning about coding and programming is just impossible for me. I can understand how to analyse and design but to implement all of it into codes are just... not my thing. This is also one of the reasons of why I can't get back on my feet for so long. the wall in front of me is just too tough for me to break.
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