A well written spoof of your over the top xinxia top tropes with the ultimate fake-it-till-you-make-it protagonist. Actually forget the making it part, it's enough to just keep on faking. After all it's not about how strong you are, it's how good you look that matters.
Good luck author! Nice work!For everyone else, this is a time wasting review swap. Still,any book written is a book with reading. Go ahead and give it a try!
''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''
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There were minor punctuation and spelling errors here and there.Plotwise, the story is intriguing and fascinating. I love how you portrayed the MC as a character who prioritises his family's safety above himself.I hope he manages to survive and somehow protect those he holds dear in those trying time.*For punctuations, if you have already used "...?!" then there isn't much need to put a comma behind the sentence unless its a phrase or dialog.There were some errors as well where you used "your" instead of "you're". You're basically means you are... or something while your is used to symbolise something belongs to you.Same goes with the word "his" and "he's" that you wanted to use.This are just pointers for you, because I really enjoyed the story.
You will regret not reading this, so don't you even dare think, "Oh , I'll pick it up sometime in the future." This series is too good. Read it. Now. Moreover, for the fans like me who are thinking that this is shounen ai and will go to find some spicy context on Ao3 to fulfill their 'reading experience', no need! This book has it all 😏❤️. On the same note, to the fans who aren't into that aspect, all the best to you for those scenes, because they might get terrifying at times. You will usually get warned by the comments, tread carefully. As for those of us who are into a bit of demented railing, cheers 🍻
Archer is really immature and a psychopath don't what's wrong with him doing Humpy Dumpy in middle of no where killing dogs nad eating their hearts out. That's some psycholathic tendency my boi... and the way he laughs at every second while talking with girls is really creepy... when he stares at dark elf chest her thought was he was admiring her beauty not seeing it lustfully it's like peeking at your neighboring bench answer sheet and when get caught the examiner thinks he just clearing some doubts. Doesn't make sense right?
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