Con una escupida de sangre, la mujer blanca miró a Feng Yun a toda prisa, luego se dio la vuelta y se escondió en la exuberante jungla. La respiración de toda la persona había convergido. Feng Yun estaba aquí y no podía sentir ninguna fluctuación del Qi del Espíritu en ella.
The world building at the start is cool, E.g the kind of uneven start and the God Class in general, but the character interactions are really garbage. His friend is annoying and the background story with his past gaming experiences is also utter bullshit.Maybe check it out for the setting but it’s a drop for me.
until now it look very good story and novel. hope it will be pick up, and we can really enjoy it, and i want to highly recommend 1 of the beast taming novel : Lord of Pets. so addicted and don't let you stop reading, give it a try :)
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The spelling made it hard to read. I couldn’t continue on. You misspelled words like “Athlete” and “nurse”. I know some people have trouble spelling, but you might benefit from an editor.
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