After cahper 171 you cannot understand anything. the translation is worse than mtl. I dont evn think there is a translator anymore. Dont even start it unless the chapters got fixed
The syntax and formatting are almost as bad as MTL. I can't read it. Takes me right out of the story. Another thing I noticed is that instead of role-playing each character the writer makes it incredibly cliche. Young master cliche. It's just not very good. Keep at it, man. Get a development editor and some proofreaders. Use Google Docs and Grammarly.
Well done this deserves a 5 star the overall has it all seriously I like how the plot twist are turning, the book's an eye catcher, keep up the good work nicely done Author!!
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Simple yet engaging to many readers (especially otakus, hey there! 😄😜).. As a reader who is an otaku, it actually suits my tastes. I hope in the next chapter it would be in a third person's view so that it wouldn't be too confusing for some readers. Because the more you keep on shifting each character's POVs, some would tend to lose interest because it is quite confusing. I hope that you could add up some more spice with the world background. I hope this review isnt too offensive... 😰🙏 I am just giving a few suggestions. I really like the story so I just hope that you would reconsider if ever :)If you want it first POV, please do use some more sensual words to let people imagine what kind of world you are putting your character into.... Thats all thank you! I hope you dont find this review offensive 😭
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