MR RUTHLESS AND HIS RUTHLESS CAPTIVE

Good story in my opinion, though the updates arent much the storu itself is well made.People readong this review should give this a try unless you like a edgy op mc thats in love with a blood yandere

Very interesting. I am intrigued in the sibling relationship and the MC's goals. I want to see what kind of plot the author has laid out.Writing Quality: I can see the quality of the writing and that you try very hard to edit. There is still small grammar errors, but overall content was prestine. I do have a pet peave for authors who tell action words, instead of showing the action. (Example: Sigh, *cough cough)Story Development: The pace of the story is perfect for this kind of genre.Character Design: I can see Zuifan's personality vividly. Just wondering if Chunu will have a big role because she seems invisible to me. Perhaps give her more descriptions. World Background: Good world building. So far the book is slowly explaining itself.

Truly fun to read ,nice plot , good storytelling.💯% worth readingMC is OP but not illogicaly plot boosted balloon. Good power system as of now.

Its a good read just hope you wont drop the book mid way........................................................................................................................................................................................

Good command of English, well-written plot, and keeps the story moving on in an interesting direction. What hooked me most is the depiction and the author's composing fashion. It makes me crave to continue. Acclaim to your creator.

This is just trash after chapter 40, things stop making sense and Mc become a brain dead hero

"Hmm… Feel grateful, Richie. I'll heal you all free-of-charge just this once."

Her soft skin felt so nice under his large calloused hand he involuntarily squeezed it.