it took an abrupt turn when they suddenly get into a weird senior brother relationship to making sexual cultivation jokes, kissing and showing affection when shes not even 14-15 every 5 seconds of the chapter like can yall chill for a bit. the story kinda got so repetitive especially now that im at the chapter where she made clones so they be having the same teasing conversations over and over again idk
it's very apparent that English is not the authors fist language, the scenes of the story don't flow together well, and the time lines make no sense ( at school all day then has work a bit later but only stays long enough to serve two customers? )
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