Mr Dangerous Billionaire Is Wrapped Around My Fingers

"I'm sorry. I know you that much." Finally, music to my ears. I smiled at him and nodded. Everything is now back to normal. I have them both back at my side. It feels good.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

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Love the book so far, you have a great system in place, and you are developing the story well, can definatly see this being a series of novels and not a one and done. Keep up the great work, and we will continue to enjoy!!!!

I recently had the pleasure of reading the first chapter of Raven, and I was thoroughly captivated! Your introduction of Raven is striking; her confident entrance and commanding presence immediately draw the reader in. The elevator scene effectively showcases her power and transformation from victim to avenger, setting a compelling tone for the story. The confrontation with Abe Jenkins is a highlight, with rising tension and visceral moments that keep the reader on edge. The revelation of Jenkins's crimes provides a strong motivation for Raven's revenge, making her actions both understandable and satisfying. While the chapter is impressive, a few minor refinements could enhance the narrative. Consider varying the language to avoid repetition and showing Raven's strong presence through her actions rather than telling. Additionally, integrating Jenkins's information more organically throughout the dialogue would improve the flow. Overall, Chapter 1 is a fantastic start filled with intrigue and excitement. I'm eager to see how Raven's story unfolds!  Readers, if you enjoy strong female leads and a compelling revenge plot, this is definitely one to read