Mother in the apocalypse

I like the story a lot.  The characters are well designed for the most part and the plot has steady progress.  I would recommend this novel.

Great story, my only issue is that the author seems to be pushing himself to create a suspense filled story instead of relaxing and taking it slow. I hope this gets continued.

I can accept that it makes no sense for a Navy SEAL to be working in the FBI for retirement money. I can accept that the MC doesn’t doubt the system which came out of no where even a little. I can accept the inaccurate descriptions of the USA and the sterotypical misogynistic depiction of female characters in the few chapters that I have read. I can accept using catties over kilograms and using weight to measure the amount of money in a bag. But live-streaming an FBI “drill” and turning a bank robber into a celebrity? What the f***. Mtling is one thing but this plot is like something out of a middle school kid’s imagination, completely unrealistic and full of holes. Even for a fictional story this is just too much. I would actually like to give this a one star review, but since it’s at least readable in English and it’s a trial read, I won’t t give a one star to the translation and release rate categories.

Just a correction: Ik it says its 5 chaps/week right now, but we r actually releasing 5 per day for the first week and at least 2 per day after that. The 5chap/week was just the default and QI forgot to change it. Also for the odd paragraphs, there's something wrong with the QI translator/editor platform that's just adding new paragraphs everywhere. I will try my best to fix it and in the mean time, plz bare with us

Alternate Beast times blah blah face slapping always ends up turning stupid…. But I like the cool house so I’ll give it a chance let’s hope it gets better.                                       

now we need this translation to start too, just like lord of the oasis, we need this too, I know for a fact this is a very very good novel, a .erg enjoyable novel, something new

It is perfect and hidden piece of gem.... Tho the only caveat is the fact that every person he meets is another genius.Also MC is a bit too forgiving, gets punished for something he did not do but forgives them not to forward his personnel motives but cause of a little girl who could not even speak to defend him..... You can't just be altruistic always, but must give a read to it.

Patiko, nors pasaulio įpatybiu daug nematėme bet istorija kuri pateikta savo vaga išpildo. Veikėjai nelabai turėjo galimybę atsiskleisti, tai gal vienintelis neigiamas atsiliepimas apie šią trumpa istorija.