Mors Diary: 473 Days on the Road to Failure

"Surge, prepare the others we are moving on tonight" (????) Take a look at the two of them leaving.

"Well if they try anything fishy I'll just get out of here. They seem strong so I'll just have to be on the lookout for ways to escape.."

"Almighty Twin Star Gods, bless be these warriors who fought for their country. May they gain passage into your heavenly realm no matter what religion they were from. Grant them peace in the afterlife and everlasting happiness. May you welcome them Brrigg, the eldest. May you love them Syyliia, the younger. Bless them."

(the old guy gives a sharp glare to jackson and jackson stops whispering to his sisters and invites him inside )

I roamed my eyes and saw a freshly bloomed flower. I smiled at its color. Blue. I remember the rose that Prince had given me. They had the same color.

His single bedroom apartment solely being used as his home during his time at university. Since he was living alone he had a lot of freedom than if he shared a dorm with other students.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Its the last day at college before exams. Ron and I were sitting in the open premises more of a garden type of the college, talking about studies as usual. He was sitting by my side. He suddenly got paused with his conversation and started gazing at me without blinking his eyes.

"My lord Light, My Lord Light." Faintly heard in Light ear.

Chapter order is all wrong, you have chapters in the wrong place, and even sentences out of order, in short this MTL is all over the place, save yourselves the headache, especially when the dickhead author expects you pay for it

The story is a bit slow and the MC is your average apocalypse junkie like you most likely he has a decent backstory overall the key difference between most story's like this recently is there is no real "game elements" and the MC has a heart problem overall story is good but slow the chapters are also small but it's a good story Luv you author for your first story it's great

Really nice novel🔥🔥🔥 already loving it and will be waiting for more chapters