More Than A Baby Mama: Less Than A Wife (A Vintage Love)

Excellent book!! I read it in all my spare time.

So far the story is great would be perfect if the author describes everything a bit more such as mc, setting/background/new significant place such as when the mc got to the sect author never really described the mc's first impression and the surroundings. Maybe the author will do it in future chapter but it's always better to described as the character moves on his journey, well at least what he is felling and what he sees in his surroundings. Also, try to describe the characters appearance a bit more. This seems to be a major issue in the original novel section, hopefully the author improves on this. One more thing that's killing me is please use capital letter for first letter of the sentence and names. Overall the story is great but needs more details, you want the readers to feel or try to feel what the character is experiencing and picture everything.

The cultivation ranks is very confusing tbh, and MC character is very annoying at all. For someone who keep saying that he is a forger, he is so hotblooded and always fight. Anyway, when I first read this novel. I really thought that it will be about forging and maybe some fights but instead, what I got is 95% fighting and 5% forging 😐

Here's my review 😁Firstly, your book is in a drama sequence that's ok but I'll say prose is better for more reads. Secondly you kept changing from first to third POV and sincerely speaking, it became confusing at some point. Thirdly, I really had a good laugh while reading it 😂😂 some scenes were Soo funny. Also, the names aren't intriguing to be frank and they're quite a few grammatical errors but that's fine... Everybody makes mistakes. I really enjoyed the book While it lasted but unfortunately couldn't move past chapter 14 as it wasn't for me, the plot definitely wasn't for me. However, keep up the good work author! Writing a story isn't an easy feat. I'll commend that I'm really really impressed with your updates... Very! So don't stop writing and updating more chapters.So overall, I'll rate it 3 over 5... Well done author and don't stop writing, you'll definitely find the reader that'll appreciate this lovely story of yours... From night flames #Author Mike.

At 25 chapters I would say that this is a good novel.Pros: Cool/Intetesting systemInteresting system for all characters Cons: Somewhat cringe dialogueCharacters not fully developed and feel hollowNot the best use of the system imoPersonally not ruthless enough and like I said I feel like he’s not using the system to it’s fullest abilityWhile I stated a lot if cons, I like the direction that the story is going in and have no big problems with the storyline and the cons are all minor things. I would recommend.

An action packed setup for the four chapters published.  Chaotic origin with bad guys showing up (decent forecasting in preceding chapters).  Fits a Warfare SciFi-Adventure genre.  Writing is easy to read.

Great story but has not been updated in awhile. Would really like to know what happened to the author, and if they will ne returning anytime soon!

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