Moonbound Alpha: King of the Forsaken

The characters say and do like a real ones. Kudos to the author.

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???? Very confused. This novel does not correspond to the raws. Th MC should have a brother and not a sister.The city is not called Gotham and the murders are different.Seems like the translator is playing author. It would be good to receive some feedback from the translator about what is going on.

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It 's a decent read. Lots of content available. World building felt pretty solid and fleshed out. Story is developing and has potential. Most of the characters are well written. My main issue is with the MC. It's like he gets the most story time but the least emotional development of all of the characters. Many chapters in, and he is still very much an out-of-touch teenager that struggles with his insecurities. His sense of justice is very skewed and relatively confusing. The moral dilemmas that he's faced has NOT given him much maturity at all. It's also a tough read when he struggles as he is not a graceful struggler (compared to say Adonis). He feels and remains overall toxic and emotionally stunted. The otherworlders in Adonis' group, in comparison, feel more relatable and dynamic. They grow from their experiences and it shows in their dialogue and actions. When I read their sections, it feels like I'm reading about young adults, not teenagers.  This basically results in a static MC that has become increasingly difficulty to root for after hundreds of chapters. As this novel leans into tropes, it's pretty ironic as well that MC (as the OP Extra) feels more like a puppet vs his enigmatic rival (who feels like he should be the Extra)...  Just my opinions. Thank you to the Author for giving me content to consume and hopefully my mind gets changed in the future chapters.

if english is not this authors first language then I would hope the readers and critics will have a bit of understanding and try to give positive feedback instead of the trolling that I usually come across because that does more harm than necessary and ultimately prevents an author from finishing the story hampering their growth just to feed some egos that think they are better than others so PLEASE BE RESPECTFUL AND UNDERSTANDING 😁 thank you