I like the concept of the story, but it’s become difficult to read.- Punctuation and grammatical errors are common, and the writing style overall can sometimes be confusing.- The story gradually becomes so convoluted with various conspiracies that it takes away from them individually. Also, the MC monologues internally about society too often and for too long; it gets boring and repetitive fast.- This is just a personal preference thing, but too many of the characters are terrible people. I’m convinced at this point that 80% of the people in the city are just sociopaths. Too often, their reasoning for treating others like metaphorical and literal punching bags is just because they can.
dropped? come back and keep writing, a good novel cannot stop open..............................................................................................................................................
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All in all the idea is interesting. The origin of abnormalities is mentioned very well. Further the setting is well defined. What bugged me was the paragraphing issue. Over in all, the novel will do well as long as the author grows with the idea.
Okay...here's my fresh out of the keyboard review.BORING. CLICHED. FILLERS.The story offers nothing new. It follows the same trend as other female MC novels of similar type.Right from the mysterious male lead to MC's cheat service, there's nothing fresh or interesting The author has copied points from other famous female novels. The General household, the overly loving grandpa, the amputated uncle, the lists simply goes on and on.Even here the arcs are not well executed. They feel disjointed and rushed. The flow that needs to be there, is lacking. Overall it looks more like reading a series of short stories.Female MC's character...difficult to say. Author has tried to make her a badass swindler MC with the generic doctor history. He failed.She looks more like an arrogant antagonist out of a Xianxia novel. Her swindling is forced and clearly unbelievable. Either she's so charming that the swindled person can't realise or the swindled person is so dumb that he doesn't realises You again have the set of characters required in a female MC novel from a general household. The PM house, the fiancee prince , the king etc.Their character build is extremely plain with nodepth.Anyway I can't find any redeeming factor about this novel apart from it being a female MC novel.The author has played safe. A disappointing read full of cliches after cliches joined with chapters full of fillers. The only fun point: the novel is fast, the translator is great.Nixes (As of chapter 60)
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