Mobster With a Broken System Wants to Dominate the Underworld

Don’t stop writing this novel plz it’s amazing story

Hi guys, this is Dukkha, the author of this novel. I wanted to clarify a few things that some of you may have been in doubt about. This story has no harem, there is romance and kingdom-building. Some people have commented that at times the story was fast-paced and unclear, I apologize for that. Finally, my first language is not English; unfortunately, I have no one to help me. I hope everyone has a good read!

Absolutely the best novel of this genre that I have ever read, the story is top notch and the characters are well made, and the world is interesting and well made even though it is only the sixteenth chapter I am already absolutely hooked to this story. But if I had to say one bad thing that would be the typical reader problem of not enough chapters :( but do not take that as an insult or something like that since I totally get that putting out more than a few chapters per week or something like that is not possible with this kind of writing quality. This would be the first novel that I would be willing to pay for chapters even though I usually do not do that, but if possible would definitely prefer that it would be free. Keep up the great work and keep writing:) all the best to you.

so after like chapter 7 there are alot of time skips and sporadic gaps in the story. simply making the story way to fast pace to keep track of the story's concept has alot of potential, but to many gaps.

Eu li até o capitulo e 28 e goste!





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This gripping tale captivates with its raw portrayal of a conflicted mobster, whose shattered loyalty and quest for control amidst a corrupt system make for a compelling narrative. The protagonist's inner struggle adds depth, as he battles not just external foes but his own morality. The high-stakes underworld drama keeps readers on the edge, exploring themes of power, redemption, and the human condition in a uniquely intense way. A must-read for fans of crime fiction that challenges conventional boundaries.

"Mobster With a Broken System Wants to Dominate the Underworld" is a thought-provoking tale that delves into the complex world of organized crime, weaving a narrative around a protagonist struggling against the very system he helped create. The novel explores themes of morality, redemption, and the human condition, as the anti-hero battles his own demons and the corrupt institutions he's entangled with.

At its core, the story invites readers to empathize with the main character, a man torn between loyalty to his criminal empire and a desire for change. His journey is not just a quest for power but a soul-searching odyssey, reflecting on the price of loyalty and the blurred lines between right and wrong in a world where survival often trumps ethics.

The author masterfully portrays the grim reality of the underworld while also hinting at the possibility of redemption, leaving us to ponder whether one can truly escape the cycle they've been born into. This gripping tale keeps us engaged, questioning our assumptions about power, loyalty, and the resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity.

In essence, "Mobster With a Broken System" is a compelling read that challenges readers to confront the darker aspects of society and the capacity for transformation within even the most hardened individuals. It serves as a cautionary tale, reminding us that sometimes, the greatest battles are fought within ourselves.